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Process by ~evilabnormalvamp:iconevilabnormalvamp:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Visual Poetry

©2005-2009 ~evilabnormalvamp
:iconevilabnormalvamp:

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This is a piece I broke my own rules to write. I wrote... in Sharpie... and didn't write on the backs of pages... **cries** I MOURN FOR THE TREES!!

However, this is the best metaphor I think I could use for the way I feel everyday. This is what is going on inside when I set you with that blank stare in the huddle before homeroom. You're seeing my poker face. You're seeing my demise.

It's not under prose because I decided just a regular document would'nt document it to its full potential. Visual prose, I feel is more effective.

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:iconjenniferstarling:
~JenniferStarling Dec 27, 2005, 9:00:28 AM
This is amazing. The chanting, relentless feel of it... :clap::clap::clap:

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Current novel-in-progress.
:iconawkwardxmoments:
~awkwardxmoments Dec 27, 2005, 9:20:58 AM
'Straining, spreading, spider-webbing.' I don't know. I love that line.

You were right. It's definetly endlessly more effective with the glaring contrasted letters and the detached font.

The 'inevitable meeting' part. I love that too.

Everything's so visual, darling.

How you be so amazingly sad good?

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We're living off some modest trust
From daddy 'fore his oil went bust
And loving you is just enough
'Cause no one gives a fuck about us
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
~evilabnormalvamp Dec 27, 2005, 10:49:59 AM
Jenn lives! This is hysterical, I was just pondering this morning about how I haven't talked to you in a while...

Ironic. Much.

Thank you for the fave, means a lot to me. =D Ahh, and I have to note you about ~Prose-R-Us... Yes, must do that..

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
~evilabnormalvamp Dec 27, 2005, 10:51:43 AM
Hey, I write it as I feel it. My mind should be a course you take for Masters in college. :XD: THAT would prepare you for the real world.

Those are probably some of my favorite parts, as well. I think the Process has multiple steps, however. There might be more installments to come. Perhaps. We'll see. =D

--
stop hiding.
i can handle you.
:iconemovamp:
~EmoVamp Dec 27, 2005, 8:31:25 PM
I agress with awkward moments bout the spider webbing line. Dig the line homie. and the tights simile. awesomeness.
Interesting idea putting it as a pic opposed to a prose init. the black and white contrast goes down well.

w00t
:iconimaginedreality:
~ImaginedReality Dec 28, 2005, 1:41:18 PM
This is awesome. x3 Now I feel bad because I haven't gotten around to reading all your stuff. T_T This is really great though; I like how it goes from a metaphorical bleeding and then in the last line I thought it was literal...I guess I forgot. :XD: I think I actually got lost on a couple of parts. I'll have to just read it again.

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Love - a grave mental disease.
:iconkampasi:
=kampasi Jan 2, 2006, 7:51:37 PM
This is really... cool. I mean, it's awful that you feel this way but it certainty hits the "tortured artist" feeling right on the head... Amazing. Good job.

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If you saw a man drowning and you could either save him or photograph the event...what kind of film would you use?

One photo out of focus is a mistake, ten photos out of focus is an experimentation, one hundred photos out of focus is a style.
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
~evilabnormalvamp Jan 3, 2006, 5:18:23 AM
I'm trying to make up for lack of activity in creativity. :XD: I'm glad you like it; it's noyl installment one methinks. /There may be more of this to come. Maybe.

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
~evilabnormalvamp Jan 3, 2006, 5:19:37 AM
It's gonna be here for a while, so you shoudn't feel bad about it. =D I can see how it would be easy to get lost... if you don't keep on top of it, you could forget what the hell the narrator was talking about. :XD:

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
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