sing to you
come here - - -
please amuse me.
let my calm sky sing to you come here - - - please amuse me. |
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As far as crit- Though this stands alone, it also could work very well in the future as the last stanza to a longer piece. Right now the ambiguity leaves it possible for this poem to tell several stories, and some are more compelling than others.
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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
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