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This one is late, I know. I'm sad about it.
It's also... my least favorite of the year, thusfar. Perhaps it's the desperation.

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:iconjenniferstarling:
I'm glad you're keeping up with your regular poem/month routine. You're learning to do a lot with a little.

As far as crit- Though this stands alone, it also could work very well in the future as the last stanza to a longer piece. Right now the ambiguity leaves it possible for this poem to tell several stories, and some are more compelling than others.

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Current novel-in-progress.
:iconvicaelestis:
*dances while juggling*

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:iconevilabnormalvamp:
Hahahahahaha I am indeed amused.

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.

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