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I Have Loved You Wrong. by ~evilabnormalvamp:iconevilabnormalvamp:



The cat's paw gently padded against the smooth, cool hardwood that nearly shone in the bright blue white balance of six a.m. Light elucidated every strand of fur lingering a few inches from its frail form, creating a soft evanescence of grey shades and tones as it swiftly stepped in and out of shadows from the slider doors. The amber contrast of the wood in the floor of the old refurbished town house against the azure hue of the cloud trick easily distracted from the feline's mission. The thick bamboo in the terracotta planter at the base of the winding, wrought iron staircase with its thin leaves and the ivory and navy toile drapes in the adjacent guestroom had a kind of iridescent aura about them brought on by the sunrise reflecting on the dew of the grass reflecting into the atmosphere.

It came upon the first step and sat, its tail swishing as if to count the moments of its contemplation. Its deep amber eyes retained their golden luster despite the wash out of the rising sunlight and it dolefully surveyed the potted bamboo as though seizing up an old acquaintance. First one paw and then another, facile in its advance as it steadied itself on its haunches and lifted itself up, sharing the dirt with the long hard stems of bamboo. Dampened with a recent watering and kept wet with the chill of night giving way to the proceeding day, the cat's fur of its paws began to darken in color with the dirt. Rethinking its step up into the bamboo's habitat it drew itself to full potential, sinking a few inches into the opaque soil as it bounded forth from the pot and onto the next step. Recoiling from the force, the pot tipped over the edge of its stair and spilled its contents onto the hardwoods; the cat began to clean its soiled paws apathetically.
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Exercise 14 in 3 a.m. Epiphany. Chosen miscellaneously by Hummingbird.

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:iconvicaelestis:
Such pretty imagery ^^

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:iconevilabnormalvamp:
Thank you. Long time no seeee. =]

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
:iconunderstated:
Such detailed description, building the mood of anticipation, rising to the ultimate crescendo as the cat takes the final bold step and... cat gets a dirty foot, licks it while looking bored.

:o

I just don't know what to make of that, but I must say it does seem illustrative of the feline reality, and very true to form for cats to be so intense and then, e', who are you and why are you breathing my air?
:iconevilabnormalvamp:
That's an excellent way to look at it; short story, depicted mostly through actions, building up to the cat more or less making a mess and not caing less about it. Sounds like every cat I've ever known.

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stop hiding.
i can handle you.
:iconvicaelestis:
Yes yes, you need to msn more.

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:iconravenstear:
Definitely would be my cat... he would so be the one to knock over the plant then look offended cause he got dirty doing it. I love your attention to detail without making it feel bogged down. As always your gift with words awes me. :blackrose:

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